Score: 2 This one has problems at nearly all levels. In particular is awkward at the phrasal level. "because I have to time to near..." It's not clear what is being said or what the intention of speech is here. Additionally, it is not clear that you understand how to answer this question since you answering it using the second person. "...simply put, they can live with their family together..." This is both awkward and demonstrates a lack of understanding of the question.
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Score: 2 This one has problems at nearly all levels. In particular is awkward at the phrasal level. "because I have to time to near..." It's not clear what is being said or what the intention of speech is here. Additionally, it is not clear that you understand how to answer this question since you answering it using the second person. "...simply put, they can live with their family together..." This is both awkward and demonstrates a lack of understanding of the question.
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